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Find myself longing to compose a melody that transcends the clichés

In the symphony of love songs, where notes of ecstasy harmonize with the fast-paced rhythm of passion, I find myself longing to compose a melody that transcends the clichés. Yet, as I grasp for the pen, I realize that my song would echo the familiar refrain of tears, screams, and disbelief. It would be a ballad of laughter and nostalgia, wrapped in the bittersweet inability to utter those three simple words: “I love you.”

For how can I capture the essence of love in mere verses, when it is a journey that defies explanation? It is the quiet moments of understanding, the shared glances that speak volumes, and the silent reassurance of presence that truly define love’s symphony.

In my heart, there is a melody waiting to be sung, a song of love that transcends the ordinary. It is a melody that whispers of patience and acceptance, of resilience in the face of adversity, and of the profound beauty found in vulnerability.

So, let us embrace the imperfections of our love story, for it is in those moments of raw honesty that true connection is forged. Let us dance to the rhythm of our own unique song, knowing that even in the silence between the notes, our love speaks volumes.

And though my love song may never be written in the grand crescendo of a sweeping ballad, it will be sung in the quiet moments of everyday life, in the gentle touch of a hand and the warmth of a smile. For love, in all its complexity, is not found in words alone, but in the silent symphony of the heart.

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  1.     Any day you want you can lift up a paraphrase and love it as your own. Didn’t Donovan say, “Clichés came softly into my window today. When you make your mind up/ to forever/ be kind… I’ll tell you right now:”
        Everyone claims to be a singer-songwriter and there are too many lyricists(poets) in need of a compatible song writer. And which do you deign to be, pray tell. Speak now and coin or forever hold your horses in mid-stream. Dare I say:
        Coin A Word For Me*
    Once a gem,
    the word’s been scrubbed
    like a pejorative stone
    in a teary creek, an
    old river gone shallow

    Oh let us coin, my lucidove,
    our ever word, because
    we’ve a tender ‘ove of us effusive
    an edgyove, a ludelove
    a kissove missive:
    folded paper plane that soars

    but gems can be dreamed of again.

    In the journeyove dream
    I awoke happy, enveloped in you
    under’ove covers

    Enraptured in the blankets
    of home
    with you
    of you

    Our embrace is
    the brightness
    of us
    with us

    We are
    the morning together
    together lovidove

    An awakening
    is here to be
    for real
    at home

    peaceful passion
    satisfaction day

    not dreaming
    but being

    in the lightness
    of us
    with us

    we are warm
    being the morning sun,
    like banners waving
    playfully above
    the river of ‘ove

    extremely rippling,
    our streaming
    child to the river

    Ripples of the day
    we stream
    like banners waving
    playfully above
    a gentle brook
    child to the stream

    The child’s babble
    joyful enough
    to be a gurgle
    in a float-along morning

    We splash along
    embraced
    by immersion
    and the kiss of the day
    fantastic
    better than a dream,
    my lucidove
    * Douglas Gilbert

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